Social networking is a way for one person to meet up with other people on the Internet. Today most people get to know each other on social media and they get married. People can also make new friends and find their old friends thanks to social networking.
However I think social networking sites harm our values. Today we can contact with one another whenever we want. As a result of this,we can not miss our beloved ones and we can not wonder what our beloved ones do because we can learn everything about them thanks to these sites. Moreover, I think social networking sites increase risk of cheating,break-up and divorce because people tend to jealously monitor their partners' activities on social networking sites.
To get rid of these negative effects of the social sites,when we miss our beloved ones,we can spend our time coming together with them rather than having a conversation on the social sites. We do not always express our feelings clearly on the Internet. Face-to-face communication helps us to understand other people better and to build better relationship with them.
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YanıtlaSilDear Ezgi,
YanıtlaSilI like your journal very much. I think you chose appropriate subject to this reflection task as social network sites have discussible aspects.They have both negative and positive effects on people. Thus, you can easily mention both positive and negative features of social network sites. Also , you gave detailed information about this topic by using visual materials. I think your images make this topic more clear and understandable. Moreover, you explained your topic choise by stating that social network sites are important part of our lives. Additionally, you stated your own ideas about the topic at the end of your journal by giving examples. Lastly, you told about the problems you associated with the topic and you developed solutions for them.Concerning the task's content, you paid attention to follow steps respectively and you evaluate the topic in every aspect. Thus, your paragraph is well-organized. When we take into account the grammer rules, I can say that you do not have any mistakes. You are very good at using grammer. My opinion about your journal is generally positive. Nonetheless , I have a question on my mind . I wonder what is the importance this topic to you ? You did not point out whether this topic has any significance to you. If so, can you tell me why you find this topic significant ?
Thanks so much for your great comments. I find this topic significant because most young people including me use these social sites and we spend a lof of time. Sometimes we don't be aware of this. If we continue to do so,we can lose some of our values.
YanıtlaSilDear Ezgi;
YanıtlaSilI also liked your journal and I have the same ideas with you. You are concerning with a problem all of us face today. Thank you for your giving awareness to us. You haven't any grammatical mistake. Your journal is well-organized and your supports are very correct. However, I think that people are guilty as social network. They can make choices between the real and cyber world.Of course the net work promotes the people to choose itself. Hence, you are right :)