If I was a jury member of the committee choosing the person of the year,Müge Anlı would be my candidate. She is an announcer in a television program named 'Müge Anlı ile Tatlı Sert'. She helps people in many ways. For example,she reveals some murders that have not been solved for a long time by talking to some people involved in events in the program that Prof. Dr. Arif Verimli and Rahmi Özkan,who is a lawyer,participate in and she prevents murderers from doing harm to other people. By doing so,perhaps she enables people who have lost their beloved ones to feel better even if she doesn't completely relieve their pain. Moreover,she can find some people,especially young people who have been lost or who have eloped thanks to some sensitive people who get through to the live performance. She also enables some adopted children who don't know their biological mother or father to come together with their family. She helps people with walking disability by sending wheelchairs to them. In addition,she sends stationery equipment and computers to students who need. In summary, Müge Anlı makes other people happy thanks to her program and I think making other people happy is the greatest happiness. People who watch this program learn from others' mistakes. For instance, that some men who use violence to their wifes are punished thanks to this program serves as a warning to other men who do so. For all the reasons mentioned above,I consider this program significant and I think Müge Anlı deserves to be the person of the year.
Dear Ezgi;
YanıtlaSilI read your paragraph. I liked it. You gave a lot of information about her. Before reading, I didn't know her literally. Thanks to your writing, I know so many things. Gramatically, as I see, you didn't do any mistake. Your paragraph is well-organized. You used sentences coherently. You used for example to illisustrate your argument. To sum up, you wrote a good paragraph. You explained your thought clearly.
Thank you :)
Hello Ezgi,
YanıtlaSilI read your paragraph and I was really surprised to see you that you picked up Müge Anlı. That is an interesting choice for me, and I read your explanations very excitedly. Actually, I liked them. First of all, when I read the information given, I realised that Müge Anlı is a clever woman and She knows how to use it. Before I read your paragraph, I had not known so much thing about her. This reflection contributes to me so much. Secondly, You said that she prevents murderer from doing harm. However, you did not explain it deeply. It is an interesting point of her and you should have explained it more deeply. To sum up, She is a good candidate and you were able to introduce her to us in a realistic and objective way. Thanks for your contributions :)
Hi mate, I know you have already two comments on your task but I can't help but comment when I see your candidate :D. I respect your choice but I wonder how she does such things, as you tell that she reveals murderers, punishes brutal husbands, finds lost people. If you know please share with us because by she sounds a superheroin or secret agent. Thanks to your task, I am interested in her life and I suppose I will investigate her life deeply. Have a nice semester!
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